Hey there, I've been a YouTuber for around 3 years, and I have nearly 1000 videos. Here's a few tips: All those annotations at the start of the video are really annoying to viewers, they take up a huge part of the screen. Videos with no commentary don't really do too well anymore, back in 2009 they were alright. Intros & outros make any video better, as long as it isn't too long and music isn't too loud or obnoxious. And just a small thing, try and avoid saying things like "Can we get 5 likes for the next episode?!" That is actually a huge pet peeve for most people, myself included. Hope this helps.